Monday, 24 November 2014

Rough Cut Feedback


Summary:

  • The first part of the song needs to be lip synced
  • Cuts between different shots need to be more smooth
  • Joshua's wearing all black in the second chorus, before the climax, where the camera goes up to the sky and back down
  • It cuts between the day and the night time, and it does not make sense
  • In the second verse, the camera moves behind the wall and comes back to the same artist, and it would be better if it moves to another artist or location, instead of coming straight back to emmanuel
What needs to be done and when:
  • We need to either film the base tracks in West Silver town in the dark or the chorus in the daylight. This is so the filming is continuously in in the daylight, or all of she shots are in the dark, after the climax (transition from white clothes to black clothes)
  • We need to add our slow motion parts, as they were not slowed down in time to meet the rough cut deadline
  • When: We will film it again sometime this week (24th - 28th of November 2014)

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