Pitch Feedback

We had a few areas to improve on after we presented our pitch:

• The setting and location pitch need photographic evidence of where we were going to be filming.

• The theory pitch needed changing. The example that was given for our music video being a mixture of illustration and amplification, was incorrect. It is now changed and the area of changed has been circled in red.

• Also, the photos of our actual storyboard needs to be added to the blog.